With the characters being designed i continued on the story. Due to me not designing the history by myself i need the history designed by Tim to progress in creating the story but with some of the info i have started writing key moments in the story listed below:
Rugby
The start of the story due to sarah just finding a note book and writing in it while camping out near the road. This is when she starts to talk about the groups origins mainly her own.
Leicester
The group needs to refuel by nicking some fuel for the mech and the truck which leads to running into a family of criminals.
Derby
Runs into group of nasti moons and are taken alongside ricky until Black Dog saves them. ricky's backstory is revealed.
Sheffield
My trail is damaged and needs to be repaired so they go to a mining museum and repairs the mech while Black dog's backstory is revealed and the setup of the second stage begins.
Due to these just being key scenes i will need to work on the story to make a good fluid connection between the them and also allow the setup for the second stage not lacking in the build up that it deserves.
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